同学们可以自己先试着写写这篇作文,再看参考作文,进行比对,以发现自己要改进的地方。
作文题:Dishonesty in Tourism
题目要求:
1. 近年来旅游行业中不诚信现象比较普遍
2. 出现这一现象的原因
3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议
参考范文:
Dishonesty in Tourism
Since 1980s, the economy of China has developed greatly. With more money in their pockets, people are spending more money on travelling, which has brought prosperity to tourism. Nevertheless, many travel agencies or agents are reported to cheat their customers and make money in a dishonest way.
The reason for dishonesty in tourism is various. First and for most, money is the spur. Some travel agencies use all means to cheat their customers in order to get more money. Secondly, to survive in the fierce competition, travel agencies have to make enough profits. To realize profit maximization, they cheat. Last but not least, their victims seem to have little sense of defending their rights.
To regulate travel agencies and protect the rights of tourists, the government has issued various laws. However, I think tourists can take the following tips to avoid travel scams. First, choose a trustworthy travel agency for your trip. Secondly, use your common sense and keep alert while travelling. Finally, defend yourself if your rights are violated.
To sum up, only when the government and tourists all make efforts can we ensure a healthy tourism market. 一篇好的考场作文无外乎审题准确、结构清晰、语言丰富。
在内容方面,同学们在写作文前一定要仔细审题。上面例举的这篇文章题目如果大家不仔细读的话很容易被误以为要写的是游客的各种不文明行 1
为,实则不然。题目中罗列了三条内容,这三条都必须写。 在结构上,第一段开门见山,提出主题。接下去的每一段的第一句一定是主题句,这之后我们通常希望大家写三点理由,这些理由应是层层递进的。在这三个层次间要有联系词来使你的表达明白地呈现在阅卷老师面前。如果必要,还需加上一些事例或数据来进一步证明你的观点。
在语言上,主要是句式和词汇。句式可以用分词、从句、倒装、疑问、被动等来丰富。而词汇就要靠大家平时多多积累了。
最后,请一定记得保证你的书写工整,清晰。网上阅卷对书写的要求更加高。还有,分配好自己的考试时间,不要匆忙作文,因为它占了25分!寥寥几行字会让阅卷老师直接把你的作文打为低分段,所以作文字数一定要保证!
2
同学们可以自己先试着写写这篇作文,再看参考作文,进行比对,以发现自己要改进的地方。
作文题:Dishonesty in Tourism
题目要求:
1. 近年来旅游行业中不诚信现象比较普遍
2. 出现这一现象的原因
3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议
参考范文:
Dishonesty in Tourism
Since 1980s, the economy of China has developed greatly. With more money in their pockets, people are spending more money on travelling, which has brought prosperity to tourism. Nevertheless, many travel agencies or agents are reported to cheat their customers and make money in a dishonest way.
The reason for dishonesty in tourism is various. First and for most, money is the spur. Some travel agencies use all means to cheat their customers in order to get more money. Secondly, to survive in the fierce competition, travel agencies have to make enough profits. To realize profit maximization, they cheat. Last but not least, their victims seem to have little sense of defending their rights.
To regulate travel agencies and protect the rights of tourists, the government has issued various laws. However, I think tourists can take the following tips to avoid travel scams. First, choose a trustworthy travel agency for your trip. Secondly, use your common sense and keep alert while travelling. Finally, defend yourself if your rights are violated.
To sum up, only when the government and tourists all make efforts can we ensure a healthy tourism market. 一篇好的考场作文无外乎审题准确、结构清晰、语言丰富。
在内容方面,同学们在写作文前一定要仔细审题。上面例举的这篇文章题目如果大家不仔细读的话很容易被误以为要写的是游客的各种不文明行 1
为,实则不然。题目中罗列了三条内容,这三条都必须写。 在结构上,第一段开门见山,提出主题。接下去的每一段的第一句一定是主题句,这之后我们通常希望大家写三点理由,这些理由应是层层递进的。在这三个层次间要有联系词来使你的表达明白地呈现在阅卷老师面前。如果必要,还需加上一些事例或数据来进一步证明你的观点。
在语言上,主要是句式和词汇。句式可以用分词、从句、倒装、疑问、被动等来丰富。而词汇就要靠大家平时多多积累了。
最后,请一定记得保证你的书写工整,清晰。网上阅卷对书写的要求更加高。还有,分配好自己的考试时间,不要匆忙作文,因为它占了25分!寥寥几行字会让阅卷老师直接把你的作文打为低分段,所以作文字数一定要保证!
2