2017高考英语书面表达道歉信写作指导

2017届高考英语书面表达道歉信写作指导

真题体验:

假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom 约好下周末去北京旅游,但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件:

1. 表示歉意;2. 解释原因;3. 另约时间。

注意:1. 词数100;2. 可适当增加细节。

【参考范文】

Dear Tom,

I am indeed very sorry that I can ’t go to Beijing with you next week , which I have promised .I feel sorry for about it and want you to know what happened .

Just now ,my cousin , Li Qiong , who left home to Australia for his further study last year , informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family . You know , we haven’t seen each other for nearly a year .

I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand me . I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing .Once again ,I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused .

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

万能模版

文体概述

道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。通常包括以下三部分内容:

1. 开门见山,表明写信目的,表示歉意。

2. 说明出现差错的原因,提出弥补措施。

3. 再次致歉,请求原谅,希望得到理解(语言要诚挚,解释的理由要真实) 。

常用语块

1. 因某事向某人道歉

____________________

2. 向……说对不起 ____________________

3. 接受我的道歉 ____________________

4. 为某事原谅某人 ____________________

5. 并非故意做某事 _____________________

6. 弥补;赔偿 _____________________

7. 赔偿;偿还 _____________________

8. 给你带来不便 _____________________

9. 给你带来许多麻烦 _____________________

10. 更加小心 _____________________

11. 犯这样愚蠢的错误

______________________

12. 应当受到责备 ______________________

13. 承担责任

_______________________

14. 难以接受的后果

______________________

15. 下不为例 ______________________

套用句式

1. 我写这封信是因……向你致歉。

2. 请接受我真诚的道歉。

3. 对于我说的话/做的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要……

4. 我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我考虑,并接受我的道歉。

5. 对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。

课堂练习

假定你是李华,寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训,回国时因为匆忙,把房东Bob 的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob 写一封道歉信,要点如下:

1. 对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。2. 提出解决的办法。3. 再次请求原谅。

注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________

课外作业

假定你是李华,你的美国老师Mr. Evans要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你写一封信向Mr. Evans道歉并说明情况。要点如下:

1. 表示歉意。2. 理由:父亲去北京出差,母亲生病住院需要人照顾。

3. 询问:是否有录音,以便补听讲座。注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

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____________________________________________________________________________ 因不能按期还书而道歉

Dear Kate,

How is everything going? I am writing to beg your pardon for my long delaying in returning to you your “Gone with the

Wind” which I read through with great interest.

I had already finished reading the book and was about to return it when my cousin came to see me. Never having seen

the book, she was so interested in it that I had no choice but to allow her to finish the book. I hope that in view of the additional delight thus afforded by your book, you will overlook my negligence (疏忽)in not returning it sooner. I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

Thanking you again for the loan.

Sincerely yours,

因不能参加讲座道歉

Dear Miss Morgan,

I’m so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. My uncle is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30 tomorrow afternoon.

I am very much interested in American society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so , could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and make up for what is covered in the talk. I would appreciate it if you could allow me to ask for a leave of absence.

参考答案

课堂练习

假定你是李华,寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训,回国时因为匆忙,把房东Bob 的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob 写一封道歉信,要点如下:

1. 对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。2. 提出解决的办法。3. 再次请求原谅。

注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Bob,

I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I came back from England and found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.

The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England, so I believe you can find another one in your local store.

How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find a similar one, I would send it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.

I am terribly sorry again for my carelessness. Please forgive me for any inconvenience caused.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

课外作业

假定你是李华,你的美国老师Mr. Evans 要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你写一封信向Mr. Evans道歉并说明情况。要点如下:

1. 表示歉意。

2. 理由:父亲去北京出差,母亲生病住院需要人照顾。

3. 询问:是否有录音,以便补听讲座。

Dear Mr. Evans,

I am indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on English history tomorrow afternoon. My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now. I am afraid that I will have to

take care of her these days.

However, I am actually very interested in English society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.

Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

2017届高考英语书面表达道歉信写作指导

真题体验:

假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom 约好下周末去北京旅游,但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件:

1. 表示歉意;2. 解释原因;3. 另约时间。

注意:1. 词数100;2. 可适当增加细节。

【参考范文】

Dear Tom,

I am indeed very sorry that I can ’t go to Beijing with you next week , which I have promised .I feel sorry for about it and want you to know what happened .

Just now ,my cousin , Li Qiong , who left home to Australia for his further study last year , informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family . You know , we haven’t seen each other for nearly a year .

I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand me . I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing .Once again ,I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused .

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

万能模版

文体概述

道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。通常包括以下三部分内容:

1. 开门见山,表明写信目的,表示歉意。

2. 说明出现差错的原因,提出弥补措施。

3. 再次致歉,请求原谅,希望得到理解(语言要诚挚,解释的理由要真实) 。

常用语块

1. 因某事向某人道歉

____________________

2. 向……说对不起 ____________________

3. 接受我的道歉 ____________________

4. 为某事原谅某人 ____________________

5. 并非故意做某事 _____________________

6. 弥补;赔偿 _____________________

7. 赔偿;偿还 _____________________

8. 给你带来不便 _____________________

9. 给你带来许多麻烦 _____________________

10. 更加小心 _____________________

11. 犯这样愚蠢的错误

______________________

12. 应当受到责备 ______________________

13. 承担责任

_______________________

14. 难以接受的后果

______________________

15. 下不为例 ______________________

套用句式

1. 我写这封信是因……向你致歉。

2. 请接受我真诚的道歉。

3. 对于我说的话/做的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要……

4. 我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我考虑,并接受我的道歉。

5. 对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。

课堂练习

假定你是李华,寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训,回国时因为匆忙,把房东Bob 的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob 写一封道歉信,要点如下:

1. 对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。2. 提出解决的办法。3. 再次请求原谅。

注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________

课外作业

假定你是李华,你的美国老师Mr. Evans要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你写一封信向Mr. Evans道歉并说明情况。要点如下:

1. 表示歉意。2. 理由:父亲去北京出差,母亲生病住院需要人照顾。

3. 询问:是否有录音,以便补听讲座。注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________ 因不能按期还书而道歉

Dear Kate,

How is everything going? I am writing to beg your pardon for my long delaying in returning to you your “Gone with the

Wind” which I read through with great interest.

I had already finished reading the book and was about to return it when my cousin came to see me. Never having seen

the book, she was so interested in it that I had no choice but to allow her to finish the book. I hope that in view of the additional delight thus afforded by your book, you will overlook my negligence (疏忽)in not returning it sooner. I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

Thanking you again for the loan.

Sincerely yours,

因不能参加讲座道歉

Dear Miss Morgan,

I’m so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. My uncle is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30 tomorrow afternoon.

I am very much interested in American society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so , could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and make up for what is covered in the talk. I would appreciate it if you could allow me to ask for a leave of absence.

参考答案

课堂练习

假定你是李华,寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训,回国时因为匆忙,把房东Bob 的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob 写一封道歉信,要点如下:

1. 对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。2. 提出解决的办法。3. 再次请求原谅。

注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Bob,

I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I came back from England and found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.

The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England, so I believe you can find another one in your local store.

How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find a similar one, I would send it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.

I am terribly sorry again for my carelessness. Please forgive me for any inconvenience caused.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

课外作业

假定你是李华,你的美国老师Mr. Evans 要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你写一封信向Mr. Evans道歉并说明情况。要点如下:

1. 表示歉意。

2. 理由:父亲去北京出差,母亲生病住院需要人照顾。

3. 询问:是否有录音,以便补听讲座。

Dear Mr. Evans,

I am indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on English history tomorrow afternoon. My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now. I am afraid that I will have to

take care of her these days.

However, I am actually very interested in English society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.

Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua


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