下面是写慰问信需要注意的几点：
1. start with a statement of sympathy
2. follow with sentences about mutual experiences or relationship. 范文：
.慰问信 （notes of sympathy on illness, injury and material loss） 亲友生了病或受了伤，或由于火灾、水灾、被盗等不幸事件蒙受了损失，就应该写封信
表示慰问。慰问信要写的真诚，要注意措辞。写慰问信时，一定要围绕一个中心，那就是使
收信人从中得到安慰和鼓舞。
1. 慰问病人 (to those who are ill) june 6, 2005
dear mrs. corbin,
i was so sorry to learn of your illness. you must hurry and get well！everybody
in the neighborhood misses you, and we’re all hoping you’ll be back soon. mr. burke joins me in sending best wishes for your speed recovery. sincerely yours,
mary burke
[译文]
亲爱的科宾夫人：
听说您病了，我非常难过。您一定要尽快地恢复健康，因为邻居们都很想念您，大家都
希望您早日出院归来。
伯克先生和我共祝您很快康复。 您真挚的
玛*伯克
2005年6月6日
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3. 慰问受伤的人（to those who have been injured） 写给受伤的人的慰问信要尽量简短、中肯。信中不必查问事故是怎么发生的，是谁的过
错，或有无见证人；而应表达你听到友人受伤后的难过心情，以及希望他不久就能痊愈等等。
换言之，你关心的不是事故的前前后后，而应该是受伤者的身体和恢复情况。 june 16, 2005
dear tom,
i just can’t tell you how sorry i was to learn of your accident. your family
tells me that your are progressing nicely, and that you’ll be out of the hospital
in about ten days, i’m certainly relieved to know that! in the next day or so you’ll receive a little package from margaret and me. i
hope you like it, and that it will help to pass the time more pleasantly. with every good wish for your swift recovery. sincerely,
[译文]
亲爱的汤姆：
知道您受到意外伤害时，我简直难以形容我心中是多么难过。您的家人告诉我，您恢复
得很好，再有十天左右的时间就可以出院了。听到这一情况后，我心中感到很宽慰。 在一两天内，您会收到玛格丽特和我寄给您的一小包东西，我希望您喜欢它，并希望它
能帮助您更愉快地消遣时光。 衷心祝愿您尽快地恢复健康！ 您真诚的
鲍勃
2005年6月16日
4.慰问蒙受物质损失的人 (to those who have suffered material loss or damage) 人们在蒙受损失时，总希望能得到朋友的安慰。这种慰问信一般都比较简短，只表示关
心和同情。
june 25, 2005
dear mr. thompson,
i was extremely sorry to hear of the fire that destroyed your beautiful house.
i know well how much that house meant to you and i hasten to offer my sympathy. with best wishes to you both. sincerely yours,
smith
[译文]
亲爱的汤普森先生：
听说火灾毁了您漂亮的住宅，我难过极了。我知道您和夫人是非常喜爱那座房子的。特
立即向您们表示慰问。
向您们致以最诚挚的同情。 您诚挚的，
史密斯
2005年6月25日
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5.安慰友人考试落榜（to those who could not pass the entrance examination） june 29, 2005
dear bill,
what shocking news to me when i was told by mr. lewis that you could not pass
the entrance examination. this means you have to wait for another year to attend the
next entrance examination. i quite understand how you feel now. still you have many
more chances to try. so i hope that you will not take this to heart, and will get
ready to try again. i am sure you will easily succeed next yours,
elizabeth
[译文]
亲爱的比尔：
我在刘易斯先生那里获悉你入学考试落榜，深感惋惜。这意味着你要等待明年再考了。
我很能理解你目前的心境。但你仍有很多机会，所以希望你别太往心里去，做好下次考试的
准备。我深信你明年一定能获得成功。 你的
伊丽莎白
2005年6月29日
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6.英文慰问信的写作格式，英文慰问信范文 慰问信 （notes of sympathy on illness, injury and material loss） 亲友生了病或受了伤，或由于火灾、水灾、被盗等不幸事件蒙受了损失，就应该写封信
表示慰问。慰问信要写的真诚，要注意措辞。写慰问信时，一定要围绕一个中心，那就是使
收信人从中得到安慰和鼓舞。 i am sorry to hear that you have been sick. in our daily lives, you have given
us too much love and care sometimes regardless of yourself. it is because of your
hard work pay, we can continuously to make progress. each class classmate all
expecting you to recover as soon as possible. while you were away, we all miss you
very much. for us you are more than a teacher. we all love you, hoping you can recover
soon. best wishes!
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7.慰问信，唁电等问候信函 祝贺升职 范例
dear mr. gokhale, i’m writing this letter to congratulate you on your new post in new delhi. i
am very delighted to hear of your promotion after three exciting and hardworking years
in taiwan. the diligence and enthusiasm contributed a great deal to the economic ties
between india and taiwan. it has been a great pleasure and privilege for me to have had the opportunity
of working closely with you over the past three years. you have been one of the most
capable representatives in taiwan. the cooperation and friendship that you so kindly
extended to me has been most gratifying. no doubt our paths will continue to cross from time to time, and i look forward
to maintaining close contact with you in your new capacity. likewise, please let me
know if i can be of help in taipei. at last, i would like, once again, to express
my sincere gratitude for your efforts to improve india-taiwan trade and investment
exchange and cooperation, and i wish you a prosperous and successful future. sincerely yours,篇二：高译教育-北京邮电大学英语翻硕-应用文写作之慰问信 高译教育-北京邮电大学英语翻硕-应用文写作之慰问信
一、概念解说：
慰问信是表示向对方关怀、慰问的信函。它是有机关或者个人，以组织或个人的名义在
他人处于特殊的情况下（如战争、自然灾害、事故），或在节假日，向对方表示问候、关心的
应用文。慰问信包括两种：一种是表示同情安慰；另一种是在节日表示问候。信应写的态度
诚恳、真切。
二、格式内容：
1、标题。可写成“慰问信”或者“xxxx 致xxxx 的慰问信”。
2、称谓。称谓应表示尊敬。
3、慰问的原因。可写事件的情况，或介绍他人的事迹等。
4、慰问。
5、署名和署时。
三、[范例参考]
范例一 表示同情安慰的慰问信 江泽民主席昨晨致电布什总统哀悼坠机遇难者 新华社北京11月13日电 中国国家主席江泽民13日就美国一架客机在纽约失事致电美
国总统布什。对遇难者表示哀悼。电文如下： 美利坚合众国华盛顿白宫乔治·沃克·布什总统阁下： 总统先生：我昨晚与你通电话后不久，便惊悉，美国一架客机在纽约失事，造成重大人
员伤亡和财产损失。我对此深感悲痛。 我谨代表中国政府和人民，向你并通过你，向美国政府和人民表示深切慰问，对遇难者
表示哀悼。
中华人民共和国主席 江泽民 二00一年十一月十三日晨于北
京 范例二 节日问候信
春节慰问信
尊敬的家长：
在我国人民的传统节日春节即将来临之际，我们全连官兵向辛勤工作在各行各业的家长
同志们表示亲切的慰问并致以崇高的敬意。 过去的一年，我们在以江泽民同志为核心的党中央领导下，我国社会主义事业莲勃发展，
经济建设成就辉煌。军队建设在邓小平同志新时期军队建设思想的指导下，按照江泽民同志
“五句话”的要求得到全面加强，军队的革命化、现代化、正规化建设水平不断提高。我们
连队，在上级机关和各级首长的领导帮助下，圆满完成了各项工作任务，连队建设又迈上了
新的台阶。被军、师、团评为军事训练先进单位；连队党支部也被师、团评为先进党支部。
这些成绩的取得与您的儿子——xxx 和全连官兵的共同努力是分不开的，他们为连队建设跨
入先进行列作出了积极的贡献。当然，这些成绩中，也句含着每位家长同志的支持和贡献。
为此，我们再一次向尊敬的家长同志们表示诚挚的感谢。同时，也希望家长同志们继续支持、
关心我们连队的建设，为把您的儿子培养成 “军地两用人才”共同努力。 最后，祝家长同志们身体健康，家庭和睦，春节愉快。 xx部队步兵第七连党支部 xx年x 月x 日篇三：英
文慰问信
地震英文慰问信范文
1》im feel very sad to know that there was a heavy earthquake in your country,
a lot of people lost their lives and also many people lost their home. we can understand your feelings because our country also suffered the same
events .our best wishes will always with you . take good care of yourself and the people anound with you. 2》we were so sorry to hear the news about the earthquake. we deeply condole with you on the earthquake. if you need any help please do no hesitate to advise us.we will try our best to
support you not only on order but also on anything else. should you have any questions please feel free to send me mail . looking forward to your reply. respectfully yours. 3》dear james, in today ’s newspaper, i read about the recent events in your town
and i am writing to extend my deepest condolences. it broke my heart to see all those pictures of those whose homes have been
destroyed in the tragic hurricane. i couldn’t believe my eyes when i saw a little
girl crying on the roof of her house asking for help. i am really worried about you
and your family, and all your friends there. i am crossing my fingers for you now
in hopes that you are all safe and sound. i can only imagine how difficult this time must be for you, and i want to extend
to you my unwavering support. our government and many nongovernmental organizations
are initiating various campaigns to urge people to donate money and necessary things
to send to america. i donated all my allowance that i have been saving for years. i feel extremely sorry for this tragedy, and i will be looking forward to hearing
from you. please pass my concern on to your parents. yours sincerely, meng fei 4》the earthquake which happened two weeks ago in sichuan province is an enormous
disaster for our whole nation. it has caused both financial and life loss. until now,
fifty thousand people lost their lives due to the earthquake and much more injured
seriously. five million people have no homes to return as the majority of the buildings
were collapsed
we are sorry about this accident. it ’s a pity that many children lost their parents
and many couples lost their lovers. i could not help but cry when hearing of the moving
stories that happened during the disaster our whole nation is a big family, every member would like to give a helping hand
to the people who suffered from the earthquake. we must show our warm-heartedness
and make donations to the stricken area so that their broken heart can be warmed. a series of actions has been taken since the earthquake happened. i believe the
stricken area will soon be restored with the soldiers and other warm-hearted people ’
s help. the future will be bright, cheer up! yours sincerely
5》地震慰问信
july 14, 2008
dear victims, i was astonished and grievous to hear of the calamitous earthquake happening on
may, 12th. it’s really a national disaster, causing tremendous loss to our whole
nation physically and mentally. by now, the terrible earthquake has claimed over 60
thousand lives, injured far more people, and led 5 million homeless. seeing the related movies and photos, i could not help crying. i’m especially
moved by those high-minded people in front of the catastrophe! i’m proud of you,
tough people!
despite the calamity, i hope that you, our brothers and sisters in the
earthquake-striken area, will believe in us, in our government, and in the power of
love. our country being a big one with a large population of about 1.4 billion, if
we share the calamity together, it would be reduced to only a small “shower ”.
therefore, please keep in mind that the road is tortuous, the future is bright. the
storm will give way to bright sunshine in the long run. and finally, everything will
be recovered, and even better than it was.best wishes! yours sincerely, linda 6》a letter of condolence
慰问信
中国四川汶川大地震灾害 严重， 已造成500多万人无家可归。请你 代表 我校 写一封
慰问信 向 灾区人民 表示 关怀和慰问。
1. 简要描述灾区的情况2. 对灾区人民 表示 关怀 和 慰问3. 表达 灾后重建家园 的
信心 dear victims,
a week ago, i was shocked at the news about the earthquake in wenchuan. and i’
m very sorry to hear that this earthquake was the greatest disaster after 1949. and
there are 40075 people who are found dead in the disaster till now and there have
been more than 500 million people who are homeless. the floor was ripped through,
many blocks and houses were seriously damaged, and even were as flat as a pancake. last but not the least, i hope we all have the confidence to rebuild your home
after the disaster. only we have the perseverance can we defeat the natural disaster. good luck and best wishes to you! yours sincerelyzzia (jy) dear victims,
on the 12 of may in 2008, an incredible and unknown earthquake suddenly happened
in wenchuan, sichuan province. almost half of china was affected. it was a huge
calamity to chinese people. until now, there are nearly 50 thousand people who died in this earthquake and
more people injured. many people lost their relatives and fell into the deep sorrow.
and they also lost their homes and hometowns. a large number of buildings were damaged.
what ’s more, many children and students lost their lives because of the collapse
of schools. and their parents who suffer from this big calamity can’t accept the
fact until now.
all of the chinese people begin to act and do everything they can when they hear
the news. almost every one of us contributes a great number of money and goods which
people in sichuan need. as students, we don’t have enough money to donate, but we
should do all that we could do. what ’s more important, we consider that we can help
sichuan people rebuilt and their home and live happily. yours sincerelyzzia (yl) 以下为查尔斯王子的来信原文及译文： 原文：the people of china have been very much in my thoughts over the past two
weeks as i have watched, with mounting concern, the effects of the devastation caused
by the terrible earthquake in sichuan province. it has been most impressive to see
the marvellous way in which the chinese humanitarian operations have brought swift
and effective relief to those affected. i am particularly pleased that the wenchuan earthquake orphan fund has been
established, to help the children who have lost their parents in the disaster.i wanted
to take this opportunity to send my deepest sympathy following this terrible tragedy
to the people of china, and my most heartfelt condolences to all those who have lost
loved ones.
my princes charities are engaging ever more closely in china, including work to
assist, in a small way, with the preservation of chinas rich and diverse heritage.
it would give me the greatest pleasure if we were able to develop these ties still
further with, in particular, practical assistance from my princes foundation for the
built environment in planning the reconstruction of parts of sichuan province.charles the prince of wales 译文：
我最近非常惦念中国人民，在过去的两周当中，我密切地关注着这场发生在四川的可恨
的地震带来的破坏及影响。在此期间，最令人印象深刻的是中国政府和人民的人道主义的行
动，为这些受到灾难的人民带来了高速及有效的援助。我感到特别欣慰的是，旨在帮助这些
在灾难中丧失双亲的孩子们的汶川大地震孤儿救助专项基金已经得到成立。 我同时也想借这次机会，向这次灾难后的中国人民致以我最深切的同情，并向失去亲人
的人们致以我发自内心深处的慰问。 我的王子基金比过去更紧密地在和中国合作，包括从某种程度上帮助保护中国丰富及多
样化的文化遗产，我们将非常乐意来进一步发展这些合作，特别是王子基金中环境重建的项
目，来参与四川省的灾后重建工作。 查尔斯
威尔士亲王
1．经济的快速发展 the rapid development of economy
2．人民生活水平的显著提高/ 稳步增长 the remarkable improvement/ steady growth
of people’s living standard
4．面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges
6．社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development
7．引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention
10. 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue
12．一些人 „而另外一些人 „ some people„ while others„
13. 就我而言/ 就个人而言 as far as i am concerned, / personally,
17．发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in„
28．学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills
29．经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden
30．考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration
31. 从另一个角度 from another perspective
34．为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society
35．打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for„
58．眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest
59．长远利益. interest in the long run
60．„有其自身的优缺点 „ has its merits and demerits/ advantages and
disadvantages
61．扬长避短 exploit to the full one ’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable
ones
72．把时间和精力放在„上 focus time and energy on„
73．扩大知识面 expand one’s scope of knowledge
78．缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden
84．提供就业机会 offer job opportunities
89．承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure
94. 主要理由列举如下 the main reasons are listed as follows:
92．适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society
1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是
更重要的
2)阐述他们各自的考虑
3)表明你的看法
行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的选择，提纲第2点要求分别阐述
这两种选择各自的理由，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择
型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的侧重点：注重
高工资和注重职业发展空间; 对比阐述他们各自的理由; 表明“我”的倾向并说明理由。 high
salaries or career development? there are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different
views about what kind of job they should choose. [1]some of them focus their attention
on the jobs that promise high salaries. [1]others show a preference for those jobs
that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.
[2]people holding the first view usually think that more money will result in
more happiness. [3]with a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich
life. otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money.
[2]however, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop h is skills as roundly as possible. [5]it is career development that counts most.
without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner
or later.
in my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us
long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness.
besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries
sooner or later. so i will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then
high salaries.
[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。
[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。
[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。
[4]“因为缺钱”。
[5]强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。
[6]while引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。
[7]“一般来说”。
[8]“选择”。
下面是写慰问信需要注意的几点：
1. start with a statement of sympathy
2. follow with sentences about mutual experiences or relationship. 范文：
.慰问信 （notes of sympathy on illness, injury and material loss） 亲友生了病或受了伤，或由于火灾、水灾、被盗等不幸事件蒙受了损失，就应该写封信
表示慰问。慰问信要写的真诚，要注意措辞。写慰问信时，一定要围绕一个中心，那就是使
收信人从中得到安慰和鼓舞。
1. 慰问病人 (to those who are ill) june 6, 2005
dear mrs. corbin,
i was so sorry to learn of your illness. you must hurry and get well！everybody
in the neighborhood misses you, and we’re all hoping you’ll be back soon. mr. burke joins me in sending best wishes for your speed recovery. sincerely yours,
mary burke
[译文]
亲爱的科宾夫人：
听说您病了，我非常难过。您一定要尽快地恢复健康，因为邻居们都很想念您，大家都
希望您早日出院归来。
伯克先生和我共祝您很快康复。 您真挚的
玛*伯克
2005年6月6日
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3. 慰问受伤的人（to those who have been injured） 写给受伤的人的慰问信要尽量简短、中肯。信中不必查问事故是怎么发生的，是谁的过
错，或有无见证人；而应表达你听到友人受伤后的难过心情，以及希望他不久就能痊愈等等。
换言之，你关心的不是事故的前前后后，而应该是受伤者的身体和恢复情况。 june 16, 2005
dear tom,
i just can’t tell you how sorry i was to learn of your accident. your family
tells me that your are progressing nicely, and that you’ll be out of the hospital
in about ten days, i’m certainly relieved to know that! in the next day or so you’ll receive a little package from margaret and me. i
hope you like it, and that it will help to pass the time more pleasantly. with every good wish for your swift recovery. sincerely,
[译文]
亲爱的汤姆：
知道您受到意外伤害时，我简直难以形容我心中是多么难过。您的家人告诉我，您恢复
得很好，再有十天左右的时间就可以出院了。听到这一情况后，我心中感到很宽慰。 在一两天内，您会收到玛格丽特和我寄给您的一小包东西，我希望您喜欢它，并希望它
能帮助您更愉快地消遣时光。 衷心祝愿您尽快地恢复健康！ 您真诚的
鲍勃
2005年6月16日
4.慰问蒙受物质损失的人 (to those who have suffered material loss or damage) 人们在蒙受损失时，总希望能得到朋友的安慰。这种慰问信一般都比较简短，只表示关
心和同情。
june 25, 2005
dear mr. thompson,
i was extremely sorry to hear of the fire that destroyed your beautiful house.
i know well how much that house meant to you and i hasten to offer my sympathy. with best wishes to you both. sincerely yours,
smith
[译文]
亲爱的汤普森先生：
听说火灾毁了您漂亮的住宅，我难过极了。我知道您和夫人是非常喜爱那座房子的。特
立即向您们表示慰问。
向您们致以最诚挚的同情。 您诚挚的，
史密斯
2005年6月25日
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5.安慰友人考试落榜（to those who could not pass the entrance examination） june 29, 2005
dear bill,
what shocking news to me when i was told by mr. lewis that you could not pass
the entrance examination. this means you have to wait for another year to attend the
next entrance examination. i quite understand how you feel now. still you have many
more chances to try. so i hope that you will not take this to heart, and will get
ready to try again. i am sure you will easily succeed next yours,
elizabeth
[译文]
亲爱的比尔：
我在刘易斯先生那里获悉你入学考试落榜，深感惋惜。这意味着你要等待明年再考了。
我很能理解你目前的心境。但你仍有很多机会，所以希望你别太往心里去，做好下次考试的
准备。我深信你明年一定能获得成功。 你的
伊丽莎白
2005年6月29日
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6.英文慰问信的写作格式，英文慰问信范文 慰问信 （notes of sympathy on illness, injury and material loss） 亲友生了病或受了伤，或由于火灾、水灾、被盗等不幸事件蒙受了损失，就应该写封信
表示慰问。慰问信要写的真诚，要注意措辞。写慰问信时，一定要围绕一个中心，那就是使
收信人从中得到安慰和鼓舞。 i am sorry to hear that you have been sick. in our daily lives, you have given
us too much love and care sometimes regardless of yourself. it is because of your
hard work pay, we can continuously to make progress. each class classmate all
expecting you to recover as soon as possible. while you were away, we all miss you
very much. for us you are more than a teacher. we all love you, hoping you can recover
soon. best wishes!
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7.慰问信，唁电等问候信函 祝贺升职 范例
dear mr. gokhale, i’m writing this letter to congratulate you on your new post in new delhi. i
am very delighted to hear of your promotion after three exciting and hardworking years
in taiwan. the diligence and enthusiasm contributed a great deal to the economic ties
between india and taiwan. it has been a great pleasure and privilege for me to have had the opportunity
of working closely with you over the past three years. you have been one of the most
capable representatives in taiwan. the cooperation and friendship that you so kindly
extended to me has been most gratifying. no doubt our paths will continue to cross from time to time, and i look forward
to maintaining close contact with you in your new capacity. likewise, please let me
know if i can be of help in taipei. at last, i would like, once again, to express
my sincere gratitude for your efforts to improve india-taiwan trade and investment
exchange and cooperation, and i wish you a prosperous and successful future. sincerely yours,篇二：高译教育-北京邮电大学英语翻硕-应用文写作之慰问信 高译教育-北京邮电大学英语翻硕-应用文写作之慰问信
一、概念解说：
慰问信是表示向对方关怀、慰问的信函。它是有机关或者个人，以组织或个人的名义在
他人处于特殊的情况下（如战争、自然灾害、事故），或在节假日，向对方表示问候、关心的
应用文。慰问信包括两种：一种是表示同情安慰；另一种是在节日表示问候。信应写的态度
诚恳、真切。
二、格式内容：
1、标题。可写成“慰问信”或者“xxxx 致xxxx 的慰问信”。
2、称谓。称谓应表示尊敬。
3、慰问的原因。可写事件的情况，或介绍他人的事迹等。
4、慰问。
5、署名和署时。
三、[范例参考]
范例一 表示同情安慰的慰问信 江泽民主席昨晨致电布什总统哀悼坠机遇难者 新华社北京11月13日电 中国国家主席江泽民13日就美国一架客机在纽约失事致电美
国总统布什。对遇难者表示哀悼。电文如下： 美利坚合众国华盛顿白宫乔治·沃克·布什总统阁下： 总统先生：我昨晚与你通电话后不久，便惊悉，美国一架客机在纽约失事，造成重大人
员伤亡和财产损失。我对此深感悲痛。 我谨代表中国政府和人民，向你并通过你，向美国政府和人民表示深切慰问，对遇难者
表示哀悼。
中华人民共和国主席 江泽民 二00一年十一月十三日晨于北
京 范例二 节日问候信
春节慰问信
尊敬的家长：
在我国人民的传统节日春节即将来临之际，我们全连官兵向辛勤工作在各行各业的家长
同志们表示亲切的慰问并致以崇高的敬意。 过去的一年，我们在以江泽民同志为核心的党中央领导下，我国社会主义事业莲勃发展，
经济建设成就辉煌。军队建设在邓小平同志新时期军队建设思想的指导下，按照江泽民同志
“五句话”的要求得到全面加强，军队的革命化、现代化、正规化建设水平不断提高。我们
连队，在上级机关和各级首长的领导帮助下，圆满完成了各项工作任务，连队建设又迈上了
新的台阶。被军、师、团评为军事训练先进单位；连队党支部也被师、团评为先进党支部。
这些成绩的取得与您的儿子——xxx 和全连官兵的共同努力是分不开的，他们为连队建设跨
入先进行列作出了积极的贡献。当然，这些成绩中，也句含着每位家长同志的支持和贡献。
为此，我们再一次向尊敬的家长同志们表示诚挚的感谢。同时，也希望家长同志们继续支持、
关心我们连队的建设，为把您的儿子培养成 “军地两用人才”共同努力。 最后，祝家长同志们身体健康，家庭和睦，春节愉快。 xx部队步兵第七连党支部 xx年x 月x 日篇三：英
文慰问信
地震英文慰问信范文
1》im feel very sad to know that there was a heavy earthquake in your country,
a lot of people lost their lives and also many people lost their home. we can understand your feelings because our country also suffered the same
events .our best wishes will always with you . take good care of yourself and the people anound with you. 2》we were so sorry to hear the news about the earthquake. we deeply condole with you on the earthquake. if you need any help please do no hesitate to advise us.we will try our best to
support you not only on order but also on anything else. should you have any questions please feel free to send me mail . looking forward to your reply. respectfully yours. 3》dear james, in today ’s newspaper, i read about the recent events in your town
and i am writing to extend my deepest condolences. it broke my heart to see all those pictures of those whose homes have been
destroyed in the tragic hurricane. i couldn’t believe my eyes when i saw a little
girl crying on the roof of her house asking for help. i am really worried about you
and your family, and all your friends there. i am crossing my fingers for you now
in hopes that you are all safe and sound. i can only imagine how difficult this time must be for you, and i want to extend
to you my unwavering support. our government and many nongovernmental organizations
are initiating various campaigns to urge people to donate money and necessary things
to send to america. i donated all my allowance that i have been saving for years. i feel extremely sorry for this tragedy, and i will be looking forward to hearing
from you. please pass my concern on to your parents. yours sincerely, meng fei 4》the earthquake which happened two weeks ago in sichuan province is an enormous
disaster for our whole nation. it has caused both financial and life loss. until now,
fifty thousand people lost their lives due to the earthquake and much more injured
seriously. five million people have no homes to return as the majority of the buildings
were collapsed
we are sorry about this accident. it ’s a pity that many children lost their parents
and many couples lost their lovers. i could not help but cry when hearing of the moving
stories that happened during the disaster our whole nation is a big family, every member would like to give a helping hand
to the people who suffered from the earthquake. we must show our warm-heartedness
and make donations to the stricken area so that their broken heart can be warmed. a series of actions has been taken since the earthquake happened. i believe the
stricken area will soon be restored with the soldiers and other warm-hearted people ’
s help. the future will be bright, cheer up! yours sincerely
5》地震慰问信
july 14, 2008
dear victims, i was astonished and grievous to hear of the calamitous earthquake happening on
may, 12th. it’s really a national disaster, causing tremendous loss to our whole
nation physically and mentally. by now, the terrible earthquake has claimed over 60
thousand lives, injured far more people, and led 5 million homeless. seeing the related movies and photos, i could not help crying. i’m especially
moved by those high-minded people in front of the catastrophe! i’m proud of you,
tough people!
despite the calamity, i hope that you, our brothers and sisters in the
earthquake-striken area, will believe in us, in our government, and in the power of
love. our country being a big one with a large population of about 1.4 billion, if
we share the calamity together, it would be reduced to only a small “shower ”.
therefore, please keep in mind that the road is tortuous, the future is bright. the
storm will give way to bright sunshine in the long run. and finally, everything will
be recovered, and even better than it was.best wishes! yours sincerely, linda 6》a letter of condolence
慰问信
中国四川汶川大地震灾害 严重， 已造成500多万人无家可归。请你 代表 我校 写一封
慰问信 向 灾区人民 表示 关怀和慰问。
1. 简要描述灾区的情况2. 对灾区人民 表示 关怀 和 慰问3. 表达 灾后重建家园 的
信心 dear victims,
a week ago, i was shocked at the news about the earthquake in wenchuan. and i’
m very sorry to hear that this earthquake was the greatest disaster after 1949. and
there are 40075 people who are found dead in the disaster till now and there have
been more than 500 million people who are homeless. the floor was ripped through,
many blocks and houses were seriously damaged, and even were as flat as a pancake. last but not the least, i hope we all have the confidence to rebuild your home
after the disaster. only we have the perseverance can we defeat the natural disaster. good luck and best wishes to you! yours sincerelyzzia (jy) dear victims,
on the 12 of may in 2008, an incredible and unknown earthquake suddenly happened
in wenchuan, sichuan province. almost half of china was affected. it was a huge
calamity to chinese people. until now, there are nearly 50 thousand people who died in this earthquake and
more people injured. many people lost their relatives and fell into the deep sorrow.
and they also lost their homes and hometowns. a large number of buildings were damaged.
what ’s more, many children and students lost their lives because of the collapse
of schools. and their parents who suffer from this big calamity can’t accept the
fact until now.
all of the chinese people begin to act and do everything they can when they hear
the news. almost every one of us contributes a great number of money and goods which
people in sichuan need. as students, we don’t have enough money to donate, but we
should do all that we could do. what ’s more important, we consider that we can help
sichuan people rebuilt and their home and live happily. yours sincerelyzzia (yl) 以下为查尔斯王子的来信原文及译文： 原文：the people of china have been very much in my thoughts over the past two
weeks as i have watched, with mounting concern, the effects of the devastation caused
by the terrible earthquake in sichuan province. it has been most impressive to see
the marvellous way in which the chinese humanitarian operations have brought swift
and effective relief to those affected. i am particularly pleased that the wenchuan earthquake orphan fund has been
established, to help the children who have lost their parents in the disaster.i wanted
to take this opportunity to send my deepest sympathy following this terrible tragedy
to the people of china, and my most heartfelt condolences to all those who have lost
loved ones.
my princes charities are engaging ever more closely in china, including work to
assist, in a small way, with the preservation of chinas rich and diverse heritage.
it would give me the greatest pleasure if we were able to develop these ties still
further with, in particular, practical assistance from my princes foundation for the
built environment in planning the reconstruction of parts of sichuan province.charles the prince of wales 译文：
我最近非常惦念中国人民，在过去的两周当中，我密切地关注着这场发生在四川的可恨
的地震带来的破坏及影响。在此期间，最令人印象深刻的是中国政府和人民的人道主义的行
动，为这些受到灾难的人民带来了高速及有效的援助。我感到特别欣慰的是，旨在帮助这些
在灾难中丧失双亲的孩子们的汶川大地震孤儿救助专项基金已经得到成立。 我同时也想借这次机会，向这次灾难后的中国人民致以我最深切的同情，并向失去亲人
的人们致以我发自内心深处的慰问。 我的王子基金比过去更紧密地在和中国合作，包括从某种程度上帮助保护中国丰富及多
样化的文化遗产，我们将非常乐意来进一步发展这些合作，特别是王子基金中环境重建的项
目，来参与四川省的灾后重建工作。 查尔斯
威尔士亲王
1．经济的快速发展 the rapid development of economy
2．人民生活水平的显著提高/ 稳步增长 the remarkable improvement/ steady growth
of people’s living standard
4．面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges
6．社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development
7．引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention
10. 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue
12．一些人 „而另外一些人 „ some people„ while others„
13. 就我而言/ 就个人而言 as far as i am concerned, / personally,
17．发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in„
28．学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills
29．经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden
30．考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration
31. 从另一个角度 from another perspective
34．为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society
35．打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for„
58．眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest
59．长远利益. interest in the long run
60．„有其自身的优缺点 „ has its merits and demerits/ advantages and
disadvantages
61．扬长避短 exploit to the full one ’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable
ones
72．把时间和精力放在„上 focus time and energy on„
73．扩大知识面 expand one’s scope of knowledge
78．缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden
84．提供就业机会 offer job opportunities
89．承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure
94. 主要理由列举如下 the main reasons are listed as follows:
92．适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society
1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是
更重要的
2)阐述他们各自的考虑
3)表明你的看法
行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的选择，提纲第2点要求分别阐述
这两种选择各自的理由，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择
型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的侧重点：注重
高工资和注重职业发展空间; 对比阐述他们各自的理由; 表明“我”的倾向并说明理由。 high
salaries or career development? there are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different
views about what kind of job they should choose. [1]some of them focus their attention
on the jobs that promise high salaries. [1]others show a preference for those jobs
that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.
[2]people holding the first view usually think that more money will result in
more happiness. [3]with a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich
life. otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money.
[2]however, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop h is skills as roundly as possible. [5]it is career development that counts most.
without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner
or later.
in my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us
long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness.
besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries
sooner or later. so i will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then
high salaries.
[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。
[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。
[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。
[4]“因为缺钱”。
[5]强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。
[6]while引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。
[7]“一般来说”。
[8]“选择”。