2010年短文改错
It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first 76_______
prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do 77_______
was to write a story or present it. My teachers 78_______
have been telling me how great my writing was. 79_______
So if they had said was true, I would have a chance 80_______
of winning the prize. What were better, I had useful 81______
help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living 82______
near my house, who was a very much famous writer. 83______
He agreed to reading my story and give me some 84______
advices on how to write like a real writer. 85______
76. 去掉第二个a 77. on改为in 78. or改为and 79. have改为had
80. they前加what 81. were改为was
84. reading改为read
82. Uncle … 后加a 83. 去掉much 85. advices改为advice
2011年全国卷
One of my unforgettable memory of my school in 76.memory→memories Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes. 77.is →was
I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to
school. The smell from it was very good. Since the lunch 79.Since→After
bell finally rang, my friends and I met under a tall tree 80.√
And had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was used 81.was\
to share her Nang with me. Nang is a specially kind of 82.specially→special cake in Xinjiang. I like them very much. Now Aigulie and 83.them→it
I study at different colleges or we can only see each other 84.or→so
during the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I miss 85. over→of
the food and the good time we had together.
2010年短文改错
It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first 76_______
prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do 77_______
was to write a story or present it. My teachers 78_______
have been telling me how great my writing was. 79_______
So if they had said was true, I would have a chance 80_______
of winning the prize. What were better, I had useful 81______
help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living 82______
near my house, who was a very much famous writer. 83______
He agreed to reading my story and give me some 84______
advices on how to write like a real writer. 85______
76. 去掉第二个a 77. on改为in 78. or改为and 79. have改为had
80. they前加what 81. were改为was
84. reading改为read
82. Uncle … 后加a 83. 去掉much 85. advices改为advice
2011年全国卷
One of my unforgettable memory of my school in 76.memory→memories Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes. 77.is →was
I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to
school. The smell from it was very good. Since the lunch 79.Since→After
bell finally rang, my friends and I met under a tall tree 80.√
And had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was used 81.was\
to share her Nang with me. Nang is a specially kind of 82.specially→special cake in Xinjiang. I like them very much. Now Aigulie and 83.them→it
I study at different colleges or we can only see each other 84.or→so
during the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I miss 85. over→of
the food and the good time we had together.